Friday, April 17, 2009

Coma

This blog is in coma. For the time being.

I have been attempting to post a blog or two for the past few days, but I feel uninspired to scribble it down. I have lots and ideas to distill, but words are too volatile to grasp. I am struggling.

Sometimes I feel that time hurdles so fast. I couldn’t quite catch the passing moments. If only I have the power to freeze time, I would so I can appreciate those memories. But I am only human, and I couldn’t do anything about it.

It is like winter all over again. Every thing is frozen.

viewing

Coma

sealed lips
yearning to be opened
there unspoken words
kept and jailed for times

frozen hands
longing for warmth
immobile and stationary
embraced by atmosphere

webbed eyes
craving to be wiped
tearless winks
filter passing memories

/totomai


This blog will be rejuvenated soon. Must be resuscitated. Fingers-crossed. Just needing an inspiration.

/totomai
04/17/09

28 comments:

  1. Sometimes, it nice to be just an observer, sitting under the tree, watching how other people move. It doesn't necessarily mean being unmotivated or lazy. Once in a while, we need to pause and listen. Take it easy and cheer up, Totomai! :)

    Love the pic pala!

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  2. it's ok. everyone needs a break for awhile! i think i'm getting there myself.. i'll be here when you're back :)

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  3. Totomai,
    Looking forward to the rejuvenation... :)

    Btw, thank you for extending your sympathies. God bless!

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  4. @Kikit, i think ill need to savor these moments. no need to push myself too much. thanks

    @floreta, thanks for the reassurance. hehe im just taking time for a take off lol

    @youre welcome mark. hope the rejuvenation will be soon haha

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  5. mabuhay ka! heheh. ala din akong powers eh! :-) pero pasasaan ba't maiinspire ka din. malay mo, mamaya.. sa bowling... hehehhe

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  6. Toto dont 'be too hard on yourself! Knowing you, you draw inspiration from almost everything. The spark will be back in no time! For now, stop and enjoy the roses! And while your at it, macro shots? :)

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  7. @attorney, salamat kanina. may nakitang inspiration kaso ang tapang ng dating haha

    @kuya rad, lekat. macro shot ka diyan. hehe thank kuya. oo nga e, medyo busy lang these days

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  8. tama si kitkit... kailangan rin natin ang pause na button. in a way, hindi lang natin maipapakita sa iba yung mga ginagawa natin, this time, sila naman yung makikita natin at maaappreciate..

    http://fjordz-hiraya.blogspot.com

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  9. thanks fjordz. yup i know hehe. minsan stop button kelangan ko ehehe

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  10. It's ok. I've been frozen far longer. :) Hope inspiration hits you soon.

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  11. Yeah, the poem is good!

    I like the way you deal with three key areas, speech, touch and vision.

    Maybe there will be a follow up poem to compliment this one soon.

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  12. Great poem - can't wait to see what comes with the thaw

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  13. It happens to all of us! I know I've been frozen many times. The poem is good! I'd say tht was the beginning of your thaw.

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  14. @May, uy long time no hear a. musta

    @STG, David and Linda, thanks guys. hope to be back soon. perhaps before the month's end lol

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  15. Sometimes, one needs to chill and re-invest in bigger worlds. See you when you get back!

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  16. I can relate, Totomai.

    I like this:

    'tearless winks
    filter passing memories'

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  17. maybe frozen, but not numb

    allow the canvas to be empty,
    wait in stillness by the rushing waters

    sometimes the hardest thing to do
    is be

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  18. i feel as though i am i the same place as you describe, blog-wise. sometimes it is just ok to sit with it...but it is frustrating at times too.

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  19. It would seem the coma is the inspiration in this one! Beautifully done.

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  20. well, i hope this feeling would spark an inspiration or two. thanks guys

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  21. tukayo tigilan muna ang plurk. back to blogging muna :p

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  22. tama ka jan tukayo. plurk withdrawal na dapat hehe

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  23. totomai, doin' good, thanks. came back to see if you were out of coma. :P

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  24. ampf! inspiration ba kamo? hindi pa ba satisfying si gentleman jack?

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  25. thanks all. looks like my muse return :-)

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  26. i'd like to think of a comma as rest...oops i meant coma...but then again a comma is a breath as well in punctuation...whichever resusitation is everything...

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